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Thursday, 12 September 2019

kasaline The Hungry Wave

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  1. Kia ora Kasaline, its Ilish here from Karoro School. I like how you called your story the hungry wave because it made me think of a wave that wanted to eat every thing in it's way. Ka kite

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  2. hi Kasaline
    i liked the way u used full stops at the end the sentance. maybenext time use them in between



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