Te Whare Tapa Wha
Te Whare Tapa Wha is a concept we talk about a lot.
They are the 4 pillars of healthy living - Your physical (taha tinana), your mental (taha hinengaro), your spiritual (taha wairua), and your family/social (taha whanau) wellbeing.
Today we will be focusing on our Taha Hinengaro - Our mental wellbeing.
Today you will be focusing on EXPLANATORY WRITING
Explanatory Writing |
“Hi, my name is Emilio. This lockdown has been really tough. I find myself feeling lazy, and sad a lot of the time. What are some ways I can cheer myself up during lockdown?”
Your task for this piece of writing is to write at least 2 PEEL paragraphs giving Emilio advice on how to look after their mental health during lockdown.
You will need to give at least 2 different pieces of advice, and explain to Emilio how they could go about doing that.
Remember for explanatory writing:
You have organised your ideas into separate paragraphs Your advice is clear, and straightforward - no maybe’s
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PLANNING
Begins on next page
Paragraph One | Paragraph Two |
POINT (One sentence - what should they do?) | Play board games. | POINT (One sentence - what should they do?) | Watch movies and eat popcorn and chocolate. |
EXPLANATION: (Two sentences - what do you mean by that?) | Play some of their favourite board games. | EXPLANATION: (Two sentences - what do you mean by that?) | They can watch any movie they like. |
EXAMPLE: (One or two sentences - What does this look like?) | The game will look like Monopoly. | EXAMPLE: (One or two sentences - What does this look like?) | They will sit down on the couch and grab their popcorn and chocolate and watch movies. |
LINK: (One sentence - Why will this make them feel better?) | Because these are fun games to play on Lockdown when you are bored . | LINK: (One sentence - Why will this make them feel better?) | Because it will be fun to relax and watch a lot of movies and eat popcorn and chocolate when you are bored on Lockdown. |
Begin your paragraph writing here: The advice that I'm going to give Emilio is that he could play any type of Board games that he wants to play.
Some other advice on what he should do on lockdown when he is bored is he can watch some movies that he wants to watch.
He can sit on the couch and eat some popcorn and chocolate and watch his favourite movies and get cosy.
Some other advice that Emilio can do on lockdown is do some exercise, go for a walk, eat healthy food, drink lots of water and get enough sleep.
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